Six Sentence Sunday

7 Oct

From The Scheme of Things, coming October 15th from Crimson Romance, a snippet of conversation between my leads, Cassie and Eric…

“Steven asked if you loved me.”

“And I said yes.”

“You said,” she sighed and mimicked his resigned tone, “‘I love her.’”

He just looked at her.

“You made it sound unpleasant.”

“Maybe it is.”


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4 Responses to “Six Sentence Sunday”

  1. Elin Gregory October 7, 2012 at 3:11 pm #

    I really like this. Not too glossy and facing up to possible problems. Intriguing six.

  2. kimberlykcomeau October 7, 2012 at 6:53 pm #

    Really wonderful dialogue. Very realistic and hard-hitting. Reveals so much about the speakers!

    • vristenpierce October 8, 2012 at 8:20 pm #

      Thanks for checkin’ it out, Kimberly!

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